Christopher M at EBAFF, Bronx, NY

The poem snowbording

I found a poem in Space #3 by Desiree from Marshall, Alaska.

I liked Snowboarding because it showed how we all get when we are excited of doing some thing fun that we had never done.

One sentence that stand out for me is:”Got that crazy feeling that I’m going to jump.” I think that this is exciting sentence is good because it  explains how eager she is.

Another sentence that I liked was:”Speeding up that steep hill.” This stood out for me because she really went into detail for this part.

I look forward to seeing what Desiree makes next because we need people like her making more poems. I hope she make a few more great poems.